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Arcanine vore

Hello, I'm a traveler that goes by the name of Seth. My trusty Arcanine sidekick and step-brother, Archy, and I are on a journey to adventure the world. He evolved extremely early, actually at a year old, so he's still young, but I'm 16, so it's ok since I can take care of him. Anyway, since we were traveling through the desert, I had a cowboy hat as well as regular clothes, and Archy had a red neckerchief around his neck. We... Well he was trudging through the sand, while I was riding him.
Seth: This desert goes on forever...
Archy: Hah... Yeah... Hah...
He was breathing heavily. I leaned over and looked at his face.
Seth: You ok bro?
Archy: Tired... That's all...
I hopped off his back.
Archy: Thank you...
Seth: No prob.
I looked off in the distance.
Seth: I think I see a small town... We can stop there.
His stomach growled and he started wagging his tail.
Archy: And eat??
I rubbed his head.
Seth: And eat. I'm hungry too!
We started walking towards the town.

Archy: We're here!
We entered through the town gate to see that this was just one of those old west ranch towns, with a sheriff and saloons and all sorts of stuff like that. But remember, this is the Pokemon world, so things are still pretty advanced, yet not advanced. You could tell that most minded their own business, unless something became their business. We walked in and looked around.
Seth: This is a nice little pit stop.
He sniffed the air.
Archy: Mmm... I smell mice.
I sniffed the air as well and smiled.
Seth: I smell that...
We looked to our right and saw a place called "Sam's Pub", and on a smaller sign "Mice infestation". I look back to Archy.
Seth: Stay here Archy, ok?
He looked at me and nodded, then sat down.
Seth: And remember, no eating anybody, ok?
He licked my face.
Archy: I won't!
I wiped the drool off my face.
Seth: Heh, alright then!
I went into the pub on the search for mice.

Archy waited outside and looked around at everyone who passed by.
Archy: (So many people...)
Eventually, a girl came up to him.
Girl: Aww, what a cute Arcanine!
She started petting his head, and Archy wagged his tail.
Girl: You're a cutie. Where's your trainer?
He shook his head like a dog and pointed in the pub.
Girl: Oh, I see.
Archy went and nuzzled her.
Girl: Heh.
He then sniffed all around her.
Girl: Heheh, what are you doing you silly Pokemon?
He stopped in front of her and smiled.
Girl: Oh, you were just checking me out, weren't you?
Archy: You smell good.
Girl: Why thank-
She went white.
Girl: Y-y-you, you just spoke!
He nodded.
Archy: You smell really good.
Girl: Um... Thank you.
He opened his mouth wide. She saw all his teeth and strings of saliva in his mouth.
Girl: Uh... That's a very nice maw you have there...
He leaned over and clamped his mouth over her head, shoulders, and half her arms.
Girl: Mmghgmgfmghf!!!
He slobbered all over her head and shoulders, then swallowed.
Archy: Mmm...
He started eating down her body and took in her waist, then moved down her legs. I came out with 10 mice being held by their tails in my hands.
Seth: Bro! I got the mice!
He turned around with two feet hanging out if his mouth. I dropped the mice and he slurped up the feet and swallowed.
Seth: Archy!
He gave me a toothy smile and was waging his tail. I marched up to him.
Seth: Spit him out.
I thought it was a guy he ate. He shook his head.
Seth: Spit him out!
He looked away.
Archy: No.
He said that in a childish way.
Seth: Spit. Him. Out.
I said that flatly. He looked back at me.
Archy: No.
I held out my hand and he growled at me. I growled back. He whined, went and laid down on his stomach, and covered his eyes with his paws.
Seth: C'mon Archy.
Archy: I don't wanna.
I crossed my arms.
Seth: Why not?
Archy: Because I'm full now.
Seth: Yeah, but it's not fair to eat people.
He took his paws off and looked up at me.
Archy: Really?
I nodded.
Archy: Can't I just keep her in my tummy for a little?
I didn't notice him saying "her".
Seth: No, spit him out.
He looked away, then stood up.
Archy: Ngh...
He lowered his head and started heaving. He contracted his stomach, and started bringing up the girl. I saw the large bulge come through his neck and he got something in his mouth. He looked over at me.
Seth: Yep.
He hesitated, then looked down and lowered his head. He opened his mouth and placed two covered-in-slobber feet on the ground, then slowly but surely let more of the girl out from his mouth. In about a minute, he let her head out from his mouth and I gasped.
Seth: Oh my- you ate a girl!!
She looked at herself and wiped the drool off of her arms.
Girl: Ewww...
I took off my cowboy hat and put it in front of my chest for manners.
Seth: I am so sorry on behalf of my brother, Archy here. He's only a year old and still doesn't know better, plus he usually only eats me-
Girl: Wait wait wait, did you say brother?!
I nodded.
Seth: Yeah, my step brother.
She wiped some more drool off herself.
Girl: How is that- you're a person and he's a Pokemon!
Archy and I looked at each other, then back at her.
Seth: It's a pretty weird story-
Girl: I just got eaten by your... Brother, here, I think I can handle it.
I hesitated, then sighed.
Seth: Well, basically, we were traveling through Larousse city and stumbled across a lab. We were picked to be test subject in an experiment, and ended up getting our genes spliced together. We're related now, and have a bit of each others genes. I'm technically an Arcanine on the inside, and he's kinda human on the inside. But he's still only 1 year old, and he evolved early, so me being 16, I'm kind of a parental figure to him, even though we're bros.
Something moved and it caught my eye. I looked to see a mouse scurry then stop and sniff the air. Archy looked and saw it too. We both lunged at the same time and tried to catch it, but ended up bonking our heads together and hitting the ground. The mouse ran away.
Both: Ow!
Girl: *tear of embarrassment* Um....
We got up holding our heads.
Seth: You're getting faster.
Archy: Ow....
He whined and put his head under my arm from behind me. I pet his head.
Girl: So... is that the only way you're an "internal" Arcanine?
I looked at her.
Seth: Heheh, sorry about that, and no, I'm like that in a lot more of ways. I have the senses of Human and Arcanine, the short attention span as you saw, sorry about that again, a love for different foods, things like that. The biggest thing is that I can communicate in Pokemon language to Archy only.
Girl: Oh really?
I nodded.
Seth: Yeah... I can't understand any other Pokemon except for Archy here.
I pat his head but he whined, so I start petting him again.
Girl: Mm Hm... What about for him?
She pointed to him.
Seth: For Archy over here, he's got the thought processing, the senses, ability to communicate with humans, and other stuff. Again, he's only a 1 year old, so yeah.
Girl: Oh, that explains why he can talk.
I nodded then realized.
Seth: Oh yeah, I never caught your name.
Girl: Oh, I'm Liz.
She held out her hand, which was still covered in a bit of drool. I shook it.
Seth: Im Seth, and this is my brother Archy.
Liz looked at him, and he hid behind me. I looked at him.
Seth: It's ok Archy, you can say hi.
I moved away and he walked up to her with his head low and tail between his legs.
Liz: Aw, it's ok Archy.
She rubbed his head and he nuzzled her.
Archy: Im sorry.
Liz: Heh, it's ok.
He started licking her dry.
Liz: Heheh, you're tickling me!
He kept going. While they were doing that, I caught a mouse by stepping on its tail. I picked it up and looked at it. It was a mouse with a red dot on its forehead, and it seemed a little big.
Seth: You'll be perfect.
I held it above my mouth and dropped it in. It tasted like... ketchup? I tilted my head back and swallowed it down my throat.
Liz: You don't eat it like that!!
I stuttered back. Archy stopped licking her and looked at her, then at me.
Seth: But it's quicker that way...
Liz: But that's not how you eat a mouse! You can get sick.
Seth: No I won't.
Archy: Heey.
I looked at him and rubbed the back of my head.
Seth: Sorry bro, I'll go catch some more mice.
???: Excuse me!
We all looked to the right see a girl running over to us.
Liz: Oh hey Rhea.
Rhea: Oh, Liz! Have you seen my mouse?
Archy and I tilted our heads.
Liz: What's it look like?
Rhea: Well, it's a bit on the fat side, and I put a red dot on it so that I could tell if it was him.
I held my stomach and swallowed.
Liz: Oh yeah! It was when we made those synthetic mice out of ketchup at our sleep over!
Rhea: Mm Hm!! I named him and everything! But he ran away from me!
Seth: I'm gonna be sick...
Everyone looked at me.
Liz: Why?
Seth: Because I think I just ate it.
Everyone's mouth dropped.
Rhea: What?!
Seth: Im sorry!! I didn't know it belonged to anyone!!
She broke down into tears and I stuttered back. Liz put her arm around her and comforted her. Archy came by my side and nuzzled my stomach.
Archy: Is he ok?
I nodded and pushed his head away.
Liz: It's alright Rhea, we can make more...
Rhea: *sniff* But he was special!
I felt really guilty for eating her mouse. I sighed.
Seth: I can give him back if you want.
Liz looked up at me. Rhea was still crying on her shoulder.
Liz: How?
I put my finger up as a sign of "wait", bent over and started heaving.
Liz: Oh, that.
I contracted my stomach and pushed the mouse up my throat, and into my mouth. I spat out the mouse in my hand and stood up.
Liz: Hey, Rhea look.
Rhea looked up at me holding out the covered-in-drool mouse to her with a toothy smile.
Rhea: Uh...
Liz whispered something in her ear and she smiled.
Rhea: Thanks...
She took the mouse from my hand and wiped the drool off it.
Rhea: You ok?
It squeaked and she hugged it.
Seth: Well, this was an extremely awkward pit stop.
Archy looked at me.
Archy: What's.... Awk-ward...?

HVR d: )
Heya guys! This is the 5th upload of my DA mass upload!

I got inspiration for this from another comic on Furaffinity: www.furaffinity.net/view/10946… Honestly the work he did was magnificent and I decided to twist it, the Pokemon way.

Main plot (c) That_Kei_Guy
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please make a sequel i really loved it and i have been reading it ever since i found it and deviant art a week ago it was one of the first i read when i learned about this site a week ago and finally joined today +fav